Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thanks!"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thanks!"
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thanks!" said the girl appreciatively, grinning now.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thanks!" said the girl appreciatively, grinning now.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thanks!" said the girl appreciatively, grinning with happiness now.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thanks!" said the girl appreciatively, grinning with happiness now.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thanks!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thanks!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thank you soooo much!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thank you soooo much!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
AmyFawkes- iShine
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Number of posts : 11036
Location : Ruling the world!~
Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thank you soooo much!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
They headed to school together.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thank you soooo much!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
They headed to school together.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thank you soooo much!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
The two headed to school together.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thank you soooo much!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
The two headed to school together.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thank you soooo much!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
The two headed to school together, full of happiness and cheerfulness and singing songs of joy and happiness.
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You think we're nearing the end of this?
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thank you soooo much!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
The two headed to school together, full of happiness and cheerfulness and singing songs of joy and happiness.
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You think we're nearing the end of this?
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
Yes, I do.
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The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thank you soooo much!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
The two headed to school together, full of happiness and cheerfulness and singing songs of joy and happiness, always smiling each other and thanking each other for being there for the other.
The End.
;D
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The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
"Thank you soooo much!" said the girl, full of appreciation, grinning with bliss now.
The two headed to school together, full of happiness and cheerfulness and singing songs of joy and happiness, always smiling each other and thanking each other for being there for the other.
The End.
;D
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