Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. I hate school, she thought.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. I hate school, she thought.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. I hate school, she thought sadly, almost crying.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. I hate school, she thought sadly, almost crying.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled to herself miserably.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled to herself miserably.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," her friend called, "what's up?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," her friend called, "what's up?"
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better, called, "what's up?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better, called, "what's up?"
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called Audrey, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better, "what's up?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called Audrey, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better, "what's up?"
AmyFawkes- iShine
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Number of posts : 11036
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Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered.
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Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly and quickly as she walked fast sadly.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly and quickly as she walked fast sadly.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly.
AmyFawkes- iShine
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Number of posts : 11036
Location : Ruling the world!~
Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?"
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Number of posts : 11036
Location : Ruling the world!~
Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" said Audrey.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" said Audrey.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey with a concerned face.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey with a concerned face.
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Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate school!"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate school!"
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Number of posts : 11036
Location : Ruling the world!~
Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl sadly.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl sadly.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice.
AmyFawkes- iShine
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Number of posts : 11036
Location : Ruling the world!~
Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends, and we're all here for you!"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends, and we're all here for you!"
AmyFawkes- iShine
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Number of posts : 11036
Location : Ruling the world!~
Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends, and we're all here for you!" said Audrey, jumping up and down.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends, and we're all here for you!" said Audrey, jumping up and down.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring, stupid middle school which really was falling into disrepair again sleepily. "I hate school," she mumbled softly to herself miserably, holding back tears.
"Hey," called the brown-haired girl named Audrey O'Brian, her best friend in the entire world, who could make anyone feel better and happier with themselves, "what's up?"
"Nothing," the girl answered quietly with her head down as she quickly walked, sadly, bursting with tears.
"Aww, what's wrong?" asked Audrey, staring at the girl with wide, concerned eyes.
"I hate stupid, brainwashing, filthy school - no, prison!" said the girl with a scowl, with a dangerous tone of anger and sadness mixed into her voice, still trying to hold back tears.
"Don't worry, you met me and the others and your awesomesauce friends here at school and we're all here for you!" said Audrey encouragingly, jumping up and down and grinning, cheering the girl up at once.
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