Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
Appearantly so.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The girl smiled as her mother greeted her warmly.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The girl smiled as her mother greeted her warmly.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The blond haired, blue eyed girl grinned in a buoyant, bright way as her mother greeted her warmly.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The blond haired, blue eyed girl grinned in a buoyant, bright way as her mother greeted her warmly.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a buoyant, bright way as her mother greeted her warmly.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a buoyant, bright way as her mother greeted her warmly.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
Lol was almost scary. xDDD
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her room to do her evil homework.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her room to do her evil homework.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her bright pink room with a view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts homework that was actually completely useless.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with a view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know.
I don't like history. xD
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with a view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know.
I don't like history. xD
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies which her mom had made.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies which her mom had made.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies which her mom had just pulled out of the oven.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies which her mom had just pulled out of the oven.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
Oh yeah, modified. I was counting the number of times it was there, including when you made it.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break.
Last edited by Iris on Mon Dec 29, 2008 3:53 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Oh. Modified twice. Silly me. :D)
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
Iris, That sentence was only modified twice. xD Edit your post.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her break, she went back up to finish her homework.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her break, she went back up to finish her homework.
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep stairs to finish her devitalizing homework.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep stairs to finish her devitalizing homework.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep stairs to finish her devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep stairs to finish her devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary.
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Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
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Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished homework she went to sleep.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished homework she went to sleep.
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Number of posts : 11036
Location : Ruling the world!~
Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, dreaming of unicorns and ponies and chocolate chip cookies.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, dreaming of unicorns and ponies and chocolate chip cookies.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the cookies.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the cookies.
AmyFawkes- iShine
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Number of posts : 11036
Location : Ruling the world!~
Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The next day, school, again.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The next day, school, again.
AmyFawkes- iShine
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Number of posts : 11036
Location : Ruling the world!~
Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The next day, she tiredly walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring middle school again sleepily.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The next day, she tiredly walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring middle school again sleepily.
Re: Modify The Sentence: The Girl Who Walked Down The Street.
The girl excitedly ran towards the ice cream truck with a smile of glee. She joyfully bought some delicious chocolate ice cream. She licked the waffle cone that contained so much chocolate ice cream that it looked as though a gargantuan brown cloud of ice cream sat on top of the fragile cone that was about to break into tiny pieces. She ingested the chocolate-flavored cream at an extremely slow speed, so slow that only turtles would go that slow, relishing it, and she quickly made her way to her home at the edge of the large, chocolatey sea. She made her way into the big, thick, bright white door made of wood that causes splinters and yelled to the highest capacity of her lungs, "I'm home! Did you miss me?"
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring middle school again sleepily.
Her mother stopped cooking her delicious meal of spaghetti with alfredo sauce, with parmesan cheese on top, to greet the girl excitedly with enthusiasm, "Welcome home, darling!"
The golden-haired girl with crystal blue eyes grinned in a such a buoyant, bright way that it was almost scary as her mother greeted her warmly.
She headed up to her insanely bright pink room with posters of all kinds of things and with a beautiful view to do her evil, insane, weird, Language Arts and History homework that was actually completely useless and she didn't need to know. In the middle of her tiring homework, she headed downstairs to get a sweet snack of warm chocolatey, gooey, freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, where the chocolate chips had melted slightly, but not all the way, so when it was taken a bite of, the chocolate chips were still hot, and melted in your house, which her mom had just pulled out of the hot oven for her to devour ravenously, since she needed a break. After her extremely extended break, she went back up the exhausting, steep spiral stairs to finish her very devitalizing homework that wasn't necessary. After she finished all of that boring unnecessary homework she fell into a peaceful sleep, which seemed like she went to sleep for an eternity, dreaming of raining chocolate chip cookies on her head, eating them, with unicorns and ponies with a beautiful rainbow that had colors of the delicious, melt-in-your-mouth cookies she had eaten earlier.
The following day, she walked the long path to her long, boring, tiring middle school again sleepily.
AmyFawkes- iShine
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Number of posts : 11036
Location : Ruling the world!~
Status : I'll be by your side forever, so smile on and ever~
Registration date : 2008-10-25
Points : 11943
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