Forgotten Faith
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Forgotten Faith
Forgotten Faith
There’s that one person who will always remain in your heart despite the fact that she may have deferred away in your mind.
There’s that one person who will always remain in your heart despite the fact that she may have deferred away in your mind.
Upon laying her eyes on the young boy, her heart began to race and her cheeks burned with a hot flare of rushing blood. His brilliant smile just blocked out all evil of the village, and his kind laugh was the only sound she heard. Red eyes often symbolized evil, but his eyes shined with purity as bright as the sun.
He was perfect.
She wanted to do something for him, watch over him just like a guardian angel. But she knew there wasn’t anything she can do.
She was known as the girl who always wished for wings. She had always longed to fly.
He was the purest boy in the village. His angel guarded him, making sure he always remained pure.
The girl came across the boy one day by the river. It was a nice day, with the blue dome towering overhead clean of clouds and the green grass waving in the wind. The surrounding forest provided cool shade from the burning sun. The water rushed by, carrying various items down the stream.
The girl sat down on the opposite side of the river bank. She waved hello with a warm smile.
The boy smiled as she greeted him. He responded with the same motion.
It was completely quiet. The only sound was of the running water penetrated the silence.
The boy’s feet were dipped in the water, the current tickling his ankle. They swayed to the right, being pushed by the force of the rushing river. It was peaceful.
The boy glanced over. The girl gazed off into the distance. She’s beautiful…He thought, leaning forward to look closer at her face. He couldn’t see it well from the distance he was away from her. Unfortunately, in an attempt to see her better he fell into the water and the river swallowed him.
The girl snapped out of her daze and glanced over to see the boy flowing down the current, drowning in the waves. She gasped and dived into the roaring stream of water, swimming alongside the current.
I can do it! She thought as she kicked her legs faster. She grabbed a hold of the boy’s hand, bringing him up upon the water. With all of her strength, she threw him upon the shore. She climbed up with her remaining strength. Crawling over to the boy, it seemed he had stopped breathing.
No! She thought as she put both hands on his chest and pressed down. She did it repeatedly. The boy started to cough. The girl beamed, and pressed again once more and let go. He coughed again and the water spilled out of his mouth. His stomach started to move up and down and the sound of breathing came from his mouth. He was alive.
A shadow was cast upon the girl. She looked up to see, standing above her, a beautiful angel.
“Are you the one who saved him?” The angel asked in a voice so pure and smooth it sounded like the chime of a bell.
The girl nodded in response.
“You have something you long for, yes?” She asked. “As payment for saving his life, I shall grant your wish for you.”
The girl looked surprised. In a flash, her back had sprouted wings of a fairy, with the light of the sun bouncing off out the seemingly metallic wings, making them glitter in the radiant energy. She moved them back and forth, seeing that they were real.
“There is one condition though,” the angel said, “If you ever voice your feelings to him, you will disappear. I know you have fallen in love with him. So I have taken away your voice in exchange for your wings.”
The girl turned to the angel, standing up and bowing in gratitude. “Thank you,” she mouthed.
The angel smiled and disappeared as the boy’s eyes began to twitch.
The boy’s vision was blurred as his eyes started to open. A figure was sitting above him and her shadow was cast over him. As his vision started to clear up, he saw a beautiful fairy above him. Her wings sparkled in the sun, her light hair was gathered up on her right shoulder. Her blue eyes looked so sincere. Their gaze locked together and they maintained the position for several minutes before the fairy got up and flew away.
Such an enchanting creature....
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I really apologize. xD Forgotten Faith was much too big for one post. I'll leave the first chapter here though, just for those who want to read it.
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EDIT: Ohoho. Updated. :]
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I'm not done yet, geez. xD It gets better later.
She kisses him. o.o
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Are you saying WTH to the tiny text?X D
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I planned on completing it today, but I'll finish it next week. Let's say that was chapter one. ;P
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You can go ahead and guess what happened next. xD
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Yeah, you can. xD
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What's wrong with guessing? It only gives me ideas for the next part since I don't know what to do. xD
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Mmk.
So then she flies away and bakes a chocolate chip cookie, and eats it. Happy ending! See?
So then she flies away and bakes a chocolate chip cookie, and eats it. Happy ending! See?
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Lol, it's supposed to be tragic.
*gets working*
*gets working*
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Uhm... then an evil witch steals the cookie and takes it for herself. SAD ENDING. BOOHOO.
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xD
Lol I'm going to use that first paragraph for my POL. xD
Lol I'm going to use that first paragraph for my POL. xD
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This.
"Upon laying her eyes upon the young boy, her heart began to race and she knew that this was love. His brilliant smile just blocked out all evil of the village, and his kind laugh was the only sound she heard. Red eyes often symbolized evil, but his eyes shined with purity as bright as the sun.
He was perfect."
It's an example of a lead. ;]
"Upon laying her eyes upon the young boy, her heart began to race and she knew that this was love. His brilliant smile just blocked out all evil of the village, and his kind laugh was the only sound she heard. Red eyes often symbolized evil, but his eyes shined with purity as bright as the sun.
He was perfect."
It's an example of a lead. ;]
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It's the best lead I've wrote. ;D
Speaking of POL I should stop procrastinating. xD
Speaking of POL I should stop procrastinating. xD
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